其实,写e-mail和写英文信相差不多,主要由称呼、正文和落款三部分构成。称呼和落款就不讲了,正文操作时要注意以下两点:
1.首先要明确写给谁。不同的收件人,语气不同。写给朋友的可用一些俚语或缩写词语,但正式的邮件就不能用俚语或缩写词语。像商用信函或是考试中的书面表达题,就是正规的写作,就不能用俚语或缩写词语。
2.写电子邮件要直接,并多用短句,使意思清楚。当然,对重点部分要作详细介绍。
习作:
你想在周末和几个好友出游。请通过电子邮件的方式给你的朋友发出邀请。 要求: ①简述一下你的出游计划,包括活动方案、目的、时间、地点等; ②提醒需要准备的东西; ③约定好出发时间和见面地点;
e.g.:
To:dennis@net.cn From:yourmail@net.com Subject:Trip Date:12 / 10 4∶20pm Hi,Dennis! I hope is going well. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Hope to see you soon. Yours,
接下来,进行信息的整合(即头脑风暴的过程):
Step1:提出 方案 (以询问的方式) What’s your plan for the coming this weekend? Some of my classmates would like to go cycling. Will you come with us?
Step2:介绍活动的目的 We are planning to ride to the mountains around our town. around our town. We hope to get away from our school life and get near to the nature and smell the fresh air. We hope in that way we can relax ourselves thoroughly.
Step3:约定好出发时间和见面地点 We’ll start at 8:00 next Sunday morning. If you can come, please let me know and we’ll wait for you at 7:50 in front of our school.
Step4:提醒需要准备的东西 What’s more, get everything ready for the outing, such as your sunglasses, hat, food and drinks. We hope to have a picnic in the mountains.
仿写练习:你想在元旦假期和几个好友出游。请通过电子邮件的方式给你的朋友发出邀请。 要求:(出游内容自定) ①简述一下你的出游计划,包括活动方案、目的、时间、地点等; ②提醒需要准备的东西; ③约定好出发时间和见面地点
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